####### Portfolio Crit

[oprior]

Hey Folks,

Just completed my online portfolio and would appreciate some feedback/constructive criticism. Looking for work in Web Development/Design or Videography. I will provide website feedback & FlashActionScriptJavaScriptASP debugging for any job leads.

www.owenprior.com

-O

[DontLikeFlash]

there it goes :

1- why Lauren Hill(spelling?) on the opening page ? (losing focus already...)
2- not sure if i like the change of background when page are loading... not sure... (grey, white, grid, at beginning)
3- navigation is poor, using keys to navigate is a good idea, problem is, the info on how to do it is not "visible at all time" : when u click X, its gone !
4- since its a portfolio, meaning its a person, not a business... can i know more about the person who made the site please... if im happy with what i learn about that person, THEN maybe i'll download the resume... =)
5- a lots of empty spaces, ok it breathes, wich is good, but too much makes me feel like theres nothing on this site...
6- using word like -graphic design- instead of Photoshop, Fireworks, etc... will help people understand, not every visitor will be a design / coding / graphic / etc. guru you know... =)

[monark110]

i thought that it was pretty decent...