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President
My game site.
Hey. Can you please check out my site? It's been up for some time now, but haven't got feedback about it. Any comments are greatly apreciated 
Giddel Creations
Thanks!
 This is MC. His _parents sent him to stop() by the super market to buy some _root beer if he wanted to gotoAndPlay() with his friends at the park later.
This is my Blog!... The gaming Process
Please check out my site: Giddel Creations
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Well, I don't know what style you are going form. The site seems to be a mix of every style. I would suggest narrowing it down to one style.
I think the logo would look better on a lighter background, but thats just me.
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up to my .as in code
Well, the first thing I would have to mention is page navigation with a predominately black background makes for rather stark white flashouts on page change. Never a fan of that. That, coupled with the ActiveX warning boxes for each flash item makes it even worse. You really need to negate the ActiveX warnings IMO.
http://www.adobe.com/cfusion/knowled...fm?id=7c29e252
As far as design, I like the way the buttons pulse and other odds and ends but visually there is no set style to the overall design with nothing showing matching colors or visual design as it relates to the item next to it. It's like a mish max of textures and colors with no sign of cohesion. The button text color really comes off badly against the stripes btw also.
I don't know man...It's a good start but just needs some design changes and definitely a pattern of style that is uniform across the board.
Good luck
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President
Thanks a lot to both for your opinions. Sometimes it's a bit difficult to make an objective critic about my own work so I didn't notice some of the things you've pointed. Thank you. Chris, I didn't know about that of the ActiveX warning, can you explain me why does that happen and if it always does? Also, do you find the boxes where the dialogs appear cool? I mean, if I change the style what things should I better remove instead of another? Thanks so much for your opinions so far and I'll apreciate any other.
 This is MC. His _parents sent him to stop() by the super market to buy some _root beer if he wanted to gotoAndPlay() with his friends at the park later.
This is my Blog!... The gaming Process
Please check out my site: Giddel Creations
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