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    swollen member
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    ######### Portfolio Critique

    Hey Folks,

    Just completed my online portfolio and would appreciate some feedback/constructive criticism. Looking for work in Web Development/Design or Videography. I will provide website feedback & FlashActionScriptJavaScriptASP debugging in return for any job leads.

    www.owenprior.com

    -O
    Owen Prior
    Web Developer/Designer & Videographer
    www.owenprior.com
    [email protected]

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    I liked the navigation...very original. Good scripting skills...clean.
    Index page does not represent content. I would give it a re-design. I liked how the images could be moved. Seems like a lot of Html.
    I would just concentrate on your strength--->Web design.
    Your illustration was weak and the movies somewhat pointless. I have seen many sites which specialize in everything (Web Design,Flash,Print,Illus,Animation.)
    Most of the time they really don't have the content to support their effort.
    I like to see specific sites which bring the Creators stengths to the forefront. Just my 2 cents. I liked the site over-all. Well-Done.
    eggheadstudio.com...version 2.0...coming soon

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    really liked the navigation and help on how to use it.

    not much content in the portfolio section, i'd lose the comics one as it's under construction and looks like a freebie gig anyway.

    video plays well but a bit patchy/low quality
    You can't have everything...where would you put it?

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