i dont usually ask for somthing like this but its worth a shot.
is there any one quite good with flash that wouldnt mind making me a good looking movie before tuesday?
this wont make toooooo much sense to you but its the general plot
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[] = movie note
() = possible dialogue ideas to follow
** = random note
-- = plot
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The final scene
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[Start with them coming off a train, 1 shot going down a road, she pushes him through the door and takes off]
--starts with Louise dropping off Patrice at the mental hospital
(Patrice says things showing he is sad/or confused)
(Louise says cold, mean things (doesn’t say much though))
[Follow Louise, 1 shot road, then at a train crossing]
--Louise gets stuck in train tracks... gets hit by train = dead
(She screams)
[Fade to black]
[Fade into Patrice’s room, Patrice on bed]
--Patrice meets his spider friend on the first night
(Hello spider... I don’t have any friends... you can be my friend etc etc)
--Patrice does a lot with his friend the spider
(O we are such great friends etc)
["Pictures" of them having fun]
--then he meets Faust, and the spider gets jealous
--he does stuff with Faust
(Add a bunch of actions and stuff he does with Faust here use dialog)
[Make spiders eyes go green… night time: Faust sleeps…]
--spider bites Faust in his sleep, killing him
(Spiders thoughts go here)
--Morning… Patrice sees dead Faust... takes spider... goes to cry at water
(His thoughts about dead Faust, what he says to the spider, to himself etc)
*HE DOESN’T KNOW THE SPIDER KILLED FAUST*
--Patrice leaves the hospital *falls into a creek... floats out through a metal grate... ends up at home*
(Dialogue goes here)
[Follow Patrice (only see him and water) pan to see burning house]
--Patrice sees the house on fire... Is. Mar. is standing outside...
(Patrice talks with Is. Mar.)
--tells Patrice Ann is inside... Patrice wants to go get her
--Patrice comes out with Ann... Realizes he lots his friend the spider
(Patrice says “o no” and stuff)
--Patrice runs back in... We see him die in a window
(AHHHHHHHHHHHH save me etc)
--Is. Mar. takes Anne to the lake... she sees how ugly they both are and decides to kill her AND Anne
(Lets clean you … o we are ugly... lets kill our selves)
[Show Michael walking along talking to himself about how he is a changed man]
(Michael says o no and stuff)
--Michael sees them in the water and jumps in saves Ann (Is. Mar. is already drowned)
--saves Anne... they go to their old home.
(Says too bad (seriously) and then says well we will have a good life and stuff)
if anyone wants to do this, ill fill you in with alot more details (being french will help, because the actual novel was french and the dialog will be french)
i am very greatfull if i get any responses
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