2 little preview screens for creepy dolls... just some opinions please ;)

[eyedea]

Hello there,
I've just uploaded 2 preview screens for a doll maker. She's got a convention to go to on saturday and wanted something up while we develop the site... - it's not set up properly yet, no preloaders - but they're only small..

Just wanted to get some opinions... if anyone can spare me a sec... the difference is mainly whether the story gets told first, illustrations used - before the photo of the doll - or whether the dolls should be introduced first, then the story...

http://www.littleappledolls.com/preview1.html = doll1 > story2

http://www.littleappledolls.com/preview2.html = story1 > doll2

Any feedback would be great

[Mr. Tackle]

i dont know what doll you are talking about, i saw a story about an apple, and his name is red.

but, id have to say...

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[eyedea]

... just in case... to get to the end, which is basically an e-mail link - you need to click the apple, after having finished reading the story...

[mentaleruptions]

Kind of freaked me out

runs into corner and hides under blankets terrified of those scarry dolls....

There doesnt seem to be alot there but i think it serves its purpose with whats there right now.

Mental
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