Hey everyone,

I'm in need of some advice/critiques on a logo I want to use to represent any of my future games. Early last year, I was dabbling in this area and produced a quick mock-up of a potential logo (top image), and I really liked the EA logo (plus, for reasons I wont disclose here, I needed to have a circular version of the logo) so I also created a secondary logo (the piece of poo, bottom image). As you can tell, they're both every thing BUT good (especially the second logo), and so I thought I'd get some quality advice from you gfx whiz's (as you can tell by now, I'm much more proficient at coding than drawing ).

I'm not asking for someone to draw me anything (if you don't want to... but of course, I wouldn't be able to credit your work since the logo would be used on all of my work), but could someone at least give me some comments on how to transform the look of what I currently have into eye-candy.

Here’s the currently crappy logos:



Thanks!

Viza.